What was good
- We are very pleased with our class mates liking the colourising as we had to work on that a lot to make the colourising as effective as we good.
- It was also very pleasing to know that the the narrative was "very clear".
- They commented on the fact that the video was "very indie" which is pleasing because this links to our genre of indie rock.
- They thought the video was very uplifting
Even better if
- They seemed to pick up on that we had too many shots of sam, the singer, and they suggested we had more shots of me, the drummer, and matt, the guitarist.
- They felt that rewind effect of us walking out of the ally way didn't make sense and didn't cut to the beat of the music.
What we will do now
- We will try to add more shots of me and Matt
- we will also evaluate the ally way rewind effect and see how we can correct it.
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